Originally Posted by Sultana:
Hi,
I want to send the following email to my office friends because they have send me a bouquet for my wife improvement's health. Can you please check the following email for errors and correct/add so that this should be good.
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Hi,
I have reveived beautiful bouquet yesterday and I am very thankful to all of you for praying to my wife's health. She was also very happy to see the beautiful bouquet and said thanks to all of you. Now Sahar is improving day by day slowly and Doctors are happy with the progress.
Again thank you so much.
Rob
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Hi,
The lovely bouquet you sent to my wife, Sahar, arrived yesterday and she was elated to see it and has asked me to pass on her heartfelt gratitude. I am very thankful to you all too for praying for her health. She has been improving day by day and even the doctors are pleased with her progress.
Again, thank you so much.
Rob
